Wednesday, October 29, 2014

Bramble Dens

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  1. -pads in and curls up- Wolfpaw, come here and sleep near me. It gets cold at night in the mountains.

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  2. Wolfpaw: ok! -curls up next to my mum- is dad ok he seems troubled it's not like him to stay in the cold he will come in right
    Stormstar: -walks in with a Rabbit- Here eat up we will need all our strength for tommorow and we will make you a medicine den with herbs -curls up next to my mate and kit-

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  3. -mews in thanks and eats part of the rabbit's flank, saving some for Wolfpaw-

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  4. -happily eats some of the rabbit and pushes some to my dad- here eat some

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  5. -pricks ears and sniffs- Wolfpaw, get away from here. Stormstar... I smell a fox. -gets on my paws and unsheathes my claws, ready to strike at the unwanted intruder-

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  6. -growls and steps into the den, my sharp teeth bared-

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  7. -fluffs out my fur and growls, trying to be big and tough like my mom-

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  8. -hisses and fluffs up my fur, glaring at the fox- Don't touch Wolfpaw, you monster! -bares teeth and my claws unsheathe-

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  9. -rushes in- TOUCH MY KIT AND YOU WILL DIE -leaps at the Fix pup and snaps its neck in my jaws then rips the pelt of the mother fox- DIE -slowly rips the throat out of the Fox- (darkness)

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  10. -stares at the bloody scene and shields Wolfpaw, lunging in and clawing at the fox's face every few seconds-

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  11. -leaps on the fox And snaps its neck and hisses as it dies- my Clan will never die!

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  12. Are you alright? -pads up to Stormstar and licks his cheek- You should have rested. You're still not fully healed.

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  13. Ugh no I'm fine -collapses and my eyes glaze over for a second- I'm loosening another life....

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  14. Ugh.. Redheart?...... -my eyes seem hazy- Are the foxes dead? Is Wolfpaw safe? -grunts- Is our Clan safe for now?..

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  15. Yes, yes, yes... but you aren't moving for the next half-moon, Stormstar! You lost two lives in one day! How reckless can you be?

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  16. I'm sorry I.... Had to protect my clan..... -sighs- I promised to make a medicine den for Wolfpaw... Wolfpaw is he ok?.....
    Wolfpaw: -nuzzles my father- I'm find I know i couldn't see what was going on but I heard how you fought I wish I wasn't blind but that doesn't matter I'm fine the way I am! :3

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  17. -closes my eyes and sighs- I know you had to protect us, but that is no excuse for putting your life in danger like that. Just be careful next time, please... -sighs- I don't want to lose any more family.

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  18. -whimpers and peeks into the den, my legs shaking with fear, then hides inside the bush I was hiding in again, keeping my eyes fixed on the big, scary cats-

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  19. -gets up- I must try to walk -walks around limping a bit but not too bad-

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  20. -picks up the Fox pup- are you all alone little one -curls my Tail around the pup- Your safe now

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  22. Its ok Redheart it's just a pup... -whispers to Redpaw- I think we killed his family

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  23. -looks at Stormstar in confusion- He's a fox pup. He can't feed off of my milk. He'll kill us all when he grows up. Instincts are instincts.

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  24. What if we teach him how cats live we could have him as one of our own clan mates come on -looks at my mate pleadingly- Please?

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  25. -growls and flicks his nose- That doesn't work on me. You aren't like a kit. But I suppose we could keep him for a small bit, until he grows. If he learns not to mercilessly attack cats, I may consider letting you keep him as a warrior.

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  26. -my fur bristles and I look up at Redheart, silently hoping she wouldn't eat me-

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  27. Ok! Hello little one now what should we call you...Hmm.. You came from that bush over there how about I call you Bush do you like that?

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  28. No or I know.... Rocky! That sounds better

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  29. Rockpup... it doesn't sound horrible. You certainly don't look like a rock, though... -purrs lightheartedly- Wolfpaw, come meet Rockpup, the newest member of our Clan.

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  30. Wolfpaw: -sniffs Rockpup- He's a fox but he doesn't seem bad I like him can we be friends? -looks at the Pup my blind eyes fixed on him- So what you say do you want to be friends

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  31. -glances at Wolfpaw uneasily and thinks: will these cats eat me?-

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  32. -speaks in Fox language- We won't eat you little one we want to help and protect you (cuz Stormstar can speak Fox language?)

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  33. -stays at a safe distance, purring and showing the young pup that there was nothing to fear, though he would have a hard time, clearly, since he just saw his parents and sibling get murdered by these very cats who were suddenly being friendly towards him-

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  34. -takes a step backwards, my ears flattened against my head, still not trusting the cat who had my family's blood on his paws, wondering if all cats hated foxes, as I had never seen a cat before now-

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  35. -still speaking Fox language- Listen I know what it's like to see you family murdered my parents and siblings were killed too all I want is not to let any helpless kit or pup die....

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  36. -sheathes my claws and returns to a relaxed state, nudging the rabbit that was left near Rockpup and closing my eyes, curling up and falling asleep-

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  37. -lays down knowin if I hurt myself Redheadt will be mad-
    Wolfpaw: Are you Cold Rockpup? If you are you can sleep here -puts down some moss- It's nice and warm! -lays down next to my father hoping Rockpup will join us on the clan as a warrior-

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  38. -doesn't know what any of these cats were saying, but lies down at least one tail length away from them, shivering-

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  39. -my tail flicks and reaches out to touch Rockpup's tail, purring loudly-

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  40. -Speaks in fox language again- It's ok I wont hurt you but you should have something to keep you warm I don't want you to freeze to death -thinks like Spiritkit-

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  41. -thinks: 'is he lying?' And walks farther away from the cats and lies down next to my mother's body, pressing my nose into her fur and whimpers-

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  42. -whispers calmly to Stormstar- You're scaring him. -gets to my paws and slowly pads to Rockpup, closing my eyes and sitting next to him, burying my nose into the fox's fur, withstanding the horrible stench so the fox could trust me-

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  43. -my fur stops bristling and I relax a little bit, though distrust still sparks in my eyes and I sigh, hoping these cats meant no harm to me, even though they killed my family--Thinks: 'No, not they....Just the gray one...He doesn't like foxes.'-

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  44. -looks at Rockpup sadly and thinks: no cat ever trusts me is it cuz I killed his family?- Oh Rockpup I'm sorry

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  45. -pads quickly back to camp, looking at the poor fox pup, and murmurs- I'm so so sorry, Rockpup... -picks Rockpup up and goes out of camp to a calm river, walking down until they reached a lake, going past that and getting to a deep part of a forest, where I deposit the unhappy pup- If you come back here, a cat is going to kill you. Run. -I signify killing my placing one claw on his throat and then I point with my tail towards the mountains- I don't want to see you dead. Go, before I know for sure that you will die.

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  46. -whimpers and thinks,'but I thought I had a home...I don't even know how to hunt....' Looks around in fear, wondering if Redheart was really going to just leave me here-

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  47. -whispers- Redheart! The kits want to join come on I want to show you somthing

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  48. -throws Mud on Redhearts fur- I'm sorrt but if the kits fund out -roles in the mud-

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  49. -shrugs off the telepathicness apparently and closes my eyes, and breathes out- Listen, Rockpup, come back here when you're full-grown and you can defend yourself. When you can, you won't be in danger of being killed. You'll still have everycat else on your side, I promise. I know you can't understand me at all, but... -imitates growing up by stretching my neck and standing on the tips of my pads, and unsheathes my claws and swipes at the air, mimicking defending, and then stands right next to him, licking his cheek- I love you very much, Rockpup. I'll teach you how to hunt first, so I'll ensure you can survive for at least a few moons. -and thus teaches him how to hunt :T-

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